Pre-Jury Feedbacks

20/04/2020

Cause I am waiting for prejury feedbacks, I will developed my forms and details afterwards.

Here my pre-jury slide: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1XJ788SPN7z8pSfGwbpRt7oMlaXIP_u9K/view?usp=sharing

With critiques of my external advisor, I planned to go with concept one, yet add it an external water container. You can find my initials in previous post.

Pre-Jury Feedbacks

ASPECTS GOING WELL…

Concept A 
– It seems more suitable to proceed, comparing to
Concept B incase of module size and form relationship
for the home purposes.

Both 
– The idea and detailing is very thoroughly and well done for
both cases.

ASPECTS THAT MUST IMPROVE…

Concept A
– Form and modularity need to be studied regarding maintenance of plants, electric circulation and etc.
– Forms enabling repetition and pattern can be proposed to make more suitable for different places in home.
– Natural materials, soft color schemes match with idea of home
growing

Concept B
– The porduct loks have an industrial language which may not be suitable for home enviroment




One comment

  1. sila umulu says:

    Hi Esmanur,

    I know that you are waiting for prejury feedbacks, they will be shared soon 🙂 It is good to decide which one to continue with. Jury feedbacks will be helpful for you to improve your concept. While waiting for perjury feedbacks and for Zoom critics, you may work on form, material, textures and color.

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